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i. I use you like ugly words meaning pretty things on my tongue to make the mockingbirds jealous and jealous they are. You make me forget about the earthquakes waiting to happen beneath my feet and you pull me past the rough tree bark of your skin. You make me believe in osmosis and that one day we'll get close enough to the stars to bend down and pick them up like daisies. You make me believe in the definition of tomorrow.
ii. Everyone is caught up on clotheslines hung with yesterday's wet jeans and overdue bills. Somehow you managed to dance footloose across the top like a tightrope walker and string me along into whatever world you came from or are going to.
iii. You want to be like the sunrise, with palms outstretched and embracing the world. You told me I was the sunset, because I was much more beautiful and lingered longer, like the taste of dark chocolate on a winter night. I knew that you preferred sunrise because you would never want to be consumed by darkness.
iv. In two weeks you will climb curtains and tree branches and whisper to the hollows of your bones to tell yourself that you can fly. Before you do though, you will tell me that sometimes pretty words mean ugly things, you will tell me that your heart has a fever of a hundred and three. You will tell me that you weren't scared of the sun setting, you were just waiting for darkness to welcome you first.
You will tell me that when the sun sets, the moon will be there to make me believe in the definition of tomorrow.
ii. Everyone is caught up on clotheslines hung with yesterday's wet jeans and overdue bills. Somehow you managed to dance footloose across the top like a tightrope walker and string me along into whatever world you came from or are going to.
iii. You want to be like the sunrise, with palms outstretched and embracing the world. You told me I was the sunset, because I was much more beautiful and lingered longer, like the taste of dark chocolate on a winter night. I knew that you preferred sunrise because you would never want to be consumed by darkness.
iv. In two weeks you will climb curtains and tree branches and whisper to the hollows of your bones to tell yourself that you can fly. Before you do though, you will tell me that sometimes pretty words mean ugly things, you will tell me that your heart has a fever of a hundred and three. You will tell me that you weren't scared of the sun setting, you were just waiting for darkness to welcome you first.
You will tell me that when the sun sets, the moon will be there to make me believe in the definition of tomorrow.
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undefinable.
describing him wasn't really as easy as they thought. they'd think of the first thing that popped to mind, and it tends to be; "he's like a stolid shell of whirling thoughts and jumbled words that seem to rush out of him in one sharp breath."
to me, he's an unlimited number of letters, words and numbers. he's a collage of the world's images, and he blends them together into a pièce de résistance. he lives by his superstitions and adores clichés, and refuses to believe in the ordinary. he pulls people to him, and they are oblivious to it.
they say, "being with him is like plunging into a whirlpool, impossible to clear your hea
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buried in pithoi
You leave me in such awe
I could disconnect my jaw
and put it in Pandora's Box;
while I'm here, I'll store my hope in,
hopin' it won't ever open. So I'll
smother it with forty locks.
Mischief is my middle name;
don't tell me yours is the same.
Or I'll change it to Frightened,
or Dead, or Enlightened,
or Sorrow or Wallow-in-Shame.
Kept it hidden in an urn,
phoenix ashes left to burn.
Pluck my ribs, put them in
Zeus's Greco Jar of Sin,
tell me that I'll never learn
how to turn gas into a spark,
how to turn light into dark,
how to turn an empty urn
into a museum for my parts.
You're sarcastic, masochistic.
I'm a s
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fingers dialing
I wrote a letter and buried it in the dirt. I wrote it for the tree's unraveling roots- just wanted to let them know that sometimes being awake isn't enough. I needed them to know that my mind is based on a story about a broken hand, and what goes on in my brain is not a rush of words, but rather a headache of loud sounds. and speaking is nothing more than these sounds falling out through my teeth. I needed to stop dreaming about losing my head and floating away. so this is me finalizing all things, saying I know I'm on the right track when I'm tied down and a train is coming. this is me screaming into a telephone, whispering that I'm scared
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And I, will always stand between us
And hold you so high
Just enough to watch you fade
Tonight you'll cry yourself asleep
As I lay awake in some far off city
Pretend you're lying next to me
Eyes wide open dreaming of you
a story to tell your friends - every avenue
I'm about 85% sure that this was written subconsciously about someone I used to know.
Are the images clear enough?
And does the ending leave a lasting impression?
© 2010 - 2024 hush-lullaby
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Love, love and love again! Really good, like the structure and how the stanzas are seperated from each other, but still shows a cohesie development. The yearning of teh speaker is loevly and potent. "You make me believe in osmosis and that one day we'll get close enough to the stars to bend down and pick them up like daisies" is possibly my favourite image. I love the differences between the speaker and the receiver, how one loves the sunrise, and the other the sunset and how they try to adjust to each other, and complement one another so well.