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01."Do you know what we are?"

"We're time tables and crossed fingers and forgotten wonders
of yesterday's dreams.
We're the shadows on concrete made from dandelions sprouting
up from between  the cracks.
And we are stray raindrops on windy,
sun-soaked mornings."

"We are alive."


02. You never screamed so loud, so angry as you did today.
But then you smiled. And I could hear your happiness a mile away.
        
"It's you. It's always you." You were trembling, but you wouldn't let me get too close.

"I'm sorry I made you this way," I whispered, shoving secrets down the neck
of my old guitar.


03. Tiny scars of my pride show like scratches on silver.
           We'll wait for the right moment to leave our mark in the skies.
You will wear blue jeans and I'll wear a smile and together we'll forget about
                                                                   life and then we'll live.
          
"Empty spaces leave more room to grow. Remember that."
                                                  
                       I think you were talking about my heart.
                                                                                Or yours.


04. I wish you would stop writing your story down in song lyrics.
                 It hurts to know that there is music
                       to go along with the heartache.
Yep. Poetry prose again. Yay.

Needs work but meh.

There should be a category for fiction with nonfiction. And there really should be a category for poetry-prose. It's taking over dA literature I swear.

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StarInYourSkye Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2009
Love the 2nd and 4th part.
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hush-lullaby Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2009
:aww:
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Ameko-Shadowsong Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I also think there needs to be a category of literature just called "emotion," but sometimes "human nature" or "romantic" or "general" just don't cut it.

I am in love with 01. As a general rule, I like 2's, but I'll make an exception for this straight-backed general today, since you have offered him perfection.

(um... yeah. don't ask. >.> )
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Nymphe-AR Featured By Owner May 24, 2009
The first two lines caught my attention & left me breathless D:
*continues reading* xD
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Nymphe-AR Featured By Owner May 24, 2009
"It hurts to know that there is music
to go along with the heartache."
Totally loved it ^_^ It's beautiful as always.
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RainySkyz Featured By Owner May 20, 2009   Writer
"04. I wish you would stop writing your story down in song lyrics. It hurts to know that there is music to go along with the heartache."

*smiles* Great words. You are so insightful and gifted in the way you share that talent.
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hush-lullaby Featured By Owner May 24, 2009
Thanks so much :heart:
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katylynn130 Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
Ah, I always love reading your work.
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hush-lullaby Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
Awh :hug:
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dead-neon-light Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
04 = :heart::heart::heart:
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